Mary Carson

Out of Character: (OOC)
What can we call you:Sarah
Roleplay experience: I've been roleplaying since march
Is this your first character here? yep
How did you find out about Nargles? my sister Gina told me

In character: (IC)

Full Name: Mary Mist Carson
Age:14
Year:4
Blood Status: Half-Blood
Heritage: Egyptian
Current Country/City: Egypt
Personality: Mary is a nice person who is very smart too. She is friendly,fun,and the most loyal friend you could ever meet. She, however was never popular and is still not. Her exceptional grades make her very sensitive about her social status too. She does her best to become popular but fails every time. She Is more grouchy and angrier then usual because of her father's recent death.

Appearance: To describe Mary she has very curly light blonde hair and light gray eyes. Her hair is shiny from being washed everyday. Her eyes sparkle and look like mist which is where she got her middle name, Mist. When not wearing her Hogwarts robes you can find Mary in a white tank top and skinny jeans. Her curly hair often falls in her face.

History: Mary was born on June 26 to Kaya and Noah Carson. she was a very happy child and was treated very sweetly. Her brother was a very interesting kid who did not bug his sister very often. Him being her constant cheerleader and being followed around constantly was annoying to. She wasn't perfect either she had told her brother off once and he'd started to cry and she was a little sister who bugged her older sister too. Her parents thought she was the prettiest little girl. Her older sister, Lily was also a real beauty with a good style. Lily and Mary did not get along at all. At the age of six she was an amazing artist and the fastest reader in the class. On her seventh birthday it led to her first magical experience when she had cut herself on a mosaic stone. As soon as she started to cry it was gone and her parents were overjoyed. When she got her acceptance from Giza she felt like the luckiest person on earth.
Hobbies: Art,Reading,and Quidditch,and Architecture
Dislikes: Nothing personal
Four adjectives to describe them: Friendly,Pretty,Athletic,Smart
Pets:Three cats Fuzzycloud -girl Fernberry -girl Grayfire -boy Snowy owl Fuzz -girl
Siblings: Older sister: Lily
Younger brother: Max

Example Post: (No less than 50 words, 3rd person ONLY


As Mary entered the communion room she smiled to herself she had finished all her homework in the library and she would read a bit before she left for supper. Her book was about the complex of Giza. She was always amazed by this particular book because of the sketches and the wonderful architecture. She scanned the book for her favorite page the bokk was very large and heavy and on her favorite page there was a sketch of Giza the entire place it was magnificent to her.

Hi Sarah! It's great to see you FINALLY applying, but there are a few things I need you to fix before I can get you sorted:

*If you could give me a bit more on her personality, that would be great. I don't really have a grasp for who Mary is, aside from being friendly and smart.

*Mary needs a flaw. She seems to perfect. She's nice, pretty, friendly, smart, and she gets along great with her siblings.

*I cannot accept an application with incorrect spelling and grammar. You need to read over your application, and fix any spelling, grammar, or punctuation errors you might find.

Once you get this sorted out, you'll be on your way to RPing!

The edits are in red.

Welcome to the Wizarding World, Mary! When you first came to Giza, the Maze Challenge placed you in...

Tutankhamun Communion!

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